If I could, I would teach a poetry class. Although I have a certificate in creative writing, I cannot teach poetry because academy culture prefers I teach within my discipline: rhetoric & composition. It’s like checking a box named “African American” when you are also Native American & Hispanic. I’m light-weight trapped. Anyway, if I could, I would teach a poetry class. & today, I did.
While grading resumes for my Improving Writing students, I discovered a poet in the midst. A particular student currently has poems published in various spaces, & I wanted to share her with the rest of her classmates. So, I did. I required her to write a haiku to share w/her classmates. Reluctantly, she did. & after her brief presentation (for the haiku is a brief three-lined poem with 17 syllables), I required each student to write a haiku on the topic REVOLUTION.
Why REVOLUTION?
Well, at FAMU, students are engaged in SGA elections (& my FAMU alumn know how theatrical & fantastical this occasion is.) Anyway, two of my male students (who are/were members of the FAMU Court) were dressed in black suits w/a REVOLUTION campaign shirt. The campaign is light-weight amazing, specifically because students are standing on the genius of civil rights activists. Their entire campaign is the epitome of throwback. I dig it–so much so that REVOLUTION became the topic of our haiku writing exercise.
Below, find the two haikus–well, I actually wrote one & provided two different last lines–that I wrote w/my students. Each of their haikus should be available in my comments below.
rEVOLution
Can you see the love
hidden in revolution
like abstract notions?
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Can you see the love
hidden in revolution
like it hides in us?
And it is these moments that totally make you remember why you entered the field…I sooooooo live for moments like those. It’s been a while. Keep uplifting the chirrens sis.
My Haiku on Revolution
Looking at the past
Change and organization
Is what I stand for
Revolution Word!
Exciting and Challenging
Hi-Five for Progress
Change happens today
A change must be within first
You must be that change
Through these eyes of mine
Old and new leaders vanish
Like dust in the wind
Stand rooted and Bold
Looking in the face of fear
You have victory
Change is on my mind
But will anybody Care
Guess we will find out
I was taught to love
But the more my eyes are opened
I see more hatred
As we try to change
We still don’t really get it
It only gets better
They say hold up fists
and stomp feet to make them watch
as change comes from crowds
Revolution Now
There is nothing wrong with change
Different is beauty
Give them back the VIOCE
Stripped away with NO regards
It’s REVOLUTION….
Why have we lost sight
Of the fight we have within,
If we hope to win?